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Wednesday, April 29, 2020

The Dawn Service




Write a story about the picture. Imagine you are there.
Planning

What do I see?
Dark, lots of people, dark clouds in the sky, people dressed warm
What do I hear?
Music, people speaking
What do I feel?
Proud, sad for deaths 
What are other people feeling?
Special time to honour people at war.
My ANZAC STORY


Every Anzac Day the people gather to remember all the soldiers that helped defend our country in the war.  

Some people wear poppies to show they are remembering the soldiers. I like Anzac biscuits - my Grandma made some for our family. The children in the picture are from brownies. It is very dark at the dawn service. I think the soldiers that fought for our country were very brave. I am proud of what they did.

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2 comments:

  1. Michelle WrightApril 30, 2020 at 12:03 PM

    Hi Lucy,

    Great planning for you ANZAC Day story. I like that you said why the people are all gathered together in the picture. Well done to Grandma for making ANZAC biscuits. I like to dunk my ANZAC biscuits into a hot coffee. Yum! Have you got any left or have they all gone?

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  2. Olivia GillApril 30, 2020 at 12:32 PM

    Hi Lucy,

    Good planning for your story, it looks like you have learnt so many new things about ANZAC. Good girl - I love seeing all your work on your blog.

    Miss Gill.

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